Tuesday, February 7, 2012

A Flash Challenge I Couldn't Refuse

Hi everybody! Thank you again SO MUCH for all the comments, Tweets, and FB posts the past two days. I am going to try to answer everybody back individually if at all possible- so thank you! Means more than I can possibly say.

Now then, today I am posting a little bit of on-the-fly flash, because I was challenged/invited to write 300 (title does not count) words for ruanne's Dancing With the Fairies writing contest.

Now you know I swore off contests long ago but I hate to turn down a flash challenge- especially an interesting one, so here we go.

She asked for 300 words about, quote: "...flash fiction (300 words or less) on your (fictional or not) first-person encounter with a faery, goblin, or fantastical being of your choice."

(Please note she added 'no undead' no vampires or zombies.) Head on over to her lovely blog Yearning for Wonderland to check out what she's giving away to the top three entries. For now, here's my response to the challenge. Hope you enjoy.


EDIT: I decided to record it as an audio blog too. You can click on the box to listen to me, or you can read it below (or both! :)



Air Mail by February Grace

Have you ever wondered what an angel’s handwriting would look like? Well I don’t wonder, ‘cause I’ve seen it. It’s angled and modest as it would have to be, after all, to pass as human for the benefit of the US Postal Service.

It had to be serendipity, a special guardian magic or whatever you want to call it that brought the angel into my life. The way he just arrived out of nowhere, at the time he did, too much to be coincidence. Just when I was most alone; just when I had given up.

He never came to me in person, no, only through the letters.

Letters in which the words seemed to automatically alter in size the worse my vision got, larger and larger so even though I’d struggle and squint I could read them, 'til the end. Until total darkness fell.

That’s when the audio recordings began to arrive.

Mysteriously dropping in through the letter slot. Appearing my computer, even my mobile devices. Revealing a voice both warm and soft that offered words to me of promise, of belief that I could survive, that I would survive, even the most difficult of all days.

He was right. I'm still here.

Angels write magnificent letters, you know. Not always tucked in linen envelopes or sealed with signet rings. They don’t look like you might expect letters from heaven to look, but they are that, just the same.

Maybe one day you'll realize you've received one. Maybe when we pass each other on the street you’ll share with me the most knowing of all glances- the one that can only be understood by those who have felt the brush of wings and fingertips both, wisping across the nape of our neck and the surface of ordinary paper.

~FG

(PS apparently the linky below in html has all the info you need if you want to join in the fun. So everything from here down is from ruanne. Thanks! ~bru)

17 What say you to that?:

  1. That was so lovely! I especially like how you described the handwriting. How perfect.

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  2. Thank you ladies! You're the best *hugs* I went back and added an audio file- this one didn't turn out all bad I suppose :~)

    thank you again!

    xoxo
    bru

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  3. I'm so glad you decided to enter! I was wondering if someone would choose 'angel' and yours was a touching example.

    Thanks also for the audio file! What a great idea. I hope other authors decide to record their stories too.

    -Anna

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    1. Thank you for inviting me, Anna! How could I say no to fellow fan of Downton Alley? I mean, er, Abbey :~D

      I've read the other entries, impressive stuff! Thank you for hosting.

      I'm glad you liked the audio too. I would love to know what more of my blogging friends sound like cause I'm an auditory person- so I hope too that others will record.

      hugs
      bru

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  4. Careful Bru, your love is showing. I'm jealous. I haven't had a letter from an angel in a long long long time.

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    1. Ah, memories, my dear Anne. Lots and lots of memories.

      And as far as you are concerned, my friend, remember that's the best part about life is that there can always be more angel letters, and you never know when they'll find you.

      xoxo
      bru

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  5. What a terrific concept, and well-executed too. Kudos.

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  6. That was beautiful. I didn't listen to the audio version as my kids are with me and they are watching tv right now. But I loved the story. :)

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  7. So wonderfully touching. So wonderful a message!

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  8. I thought this was quite a modern fairytale, encountering angels through whatever medium you were using, be it post or email. It's wonderfully creative. :)

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  9. So lovely. Thank you for writing this.

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  10. "... wisping across the nape of our neck and the surface of ordinary paper"... lovely!

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  11. Thank you so much for all your kind words, everyone, and I apologize I didn't leave more comments on your entries. My brother was in ICU last week and I was taking care of him after he got out until yesterday and I am exhausted. I read many of them though even though I couldn't formulate comments. Great talent in this contest!

    hugs
    bru

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  12. I love the concept of angels communicating through "magnificent letters," and I love your entry. It's beautiful, lyrical, makes my eyes happy to ready it.

    So sorry to hear about your brother. I hope he's recovering and that you're able to get some rest.

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Thank you so much for taking time out of your day to share a few words!

Please note that due to my health/limited use of my eyesight I can't always answer every comment, but I always do my best and every one will be read.

Comments may be answered on the blog or via email depending on my health on a given day, so if there is no email linked to your Blogger ID, I might not be able to find you!

xoxo bru